My comments

Hi Grace I liked your story because you used descriptive words to describe the hat, but i think you should let people to try to infer what is going on in the text so they can understand better. But it was very good. 🙂 Hi Matt I liked your story but I think you need to … [Read more…]

100wc week 9

I was walking home last night I saw a giant glossy black shape in the dark beside me. I was a bit startled and as I needed to get home in a hurry I didn’t stop to investigate. That night I couldn’t stop wondering about what I had seen, and so the next morning I … [Read more…]