100wc week 9

I was walking home last night I saw a giant glossy black shape in the dark beside me. I was a bit startled and as I needed to get home in a hurry I didn’t stop to investigate.

That night I couldn’t stop wondering about what I had seen, and so the next morning I went back to where I thought I had seen it, but the shape was gone.

“Whatever has happened?” I thought.

I looked around and saw a pile of small black pebbles which appeared to be covered in small white spots. I picked one up and that’s when I noticed they weren’t spots. They were eyes.




One Comment

  1. jennifer2018

    Hi Julia,
    I think you used some great describing words like ‘glossy, small’. Something you could take into account is that I got a bit confused when a giant glossy shape was now small black pebbles. Overall I think that you punctuation is quite good and I think you did a good job. Keep it up!

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