My comments

Hi Grace
I liked your story because you used descriptive words to describe the hat, but i think you should let people to try to infer what is going on in the text so they can understand better. But it was very
good. 🙂

Hi Matt
I liked your story but I think you need to check it again and edit some of the words. But it was a good story. 🙂
from Julia

Hi Evan
well done I thought it was a very good but,I think you should proof read before you finish because I saw some misspelled words. Other than that it was really good
from Julia
🙂 🙂

Hi Hanna,
I thought you did a very good job on your story it was very descriptive and very well written, but it was a bit of a sudden ending as it jumped to 33 years later.
from Julia
🙂

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