commenting on peoples blogs

Hi grace
the story was really good but i think if it wasn’t a 100 word challenge it would be even better.

from Julia

Hi sienna
i liked your poem about books you could make it a bit longer but its still really good when it is short .

from Julia

Hi Sophie

I liked your story but i think you could say why he was growing or why he was hit by lightning. but it was good how you made it into someone telling it.

from Julia

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