commenting on peoples blogs

Hi Matthew
i liked the story and how the statues are alive. but i think the end was not really complete because it says we seemed to have a good time and i personally think it could have ended with a different sentence. but it was really good .

from Julia

Hi Sienna
I think it was a good story. But i think it was hard to understand what was going on because the sentences where a bit random but it was still a good story.

from Julia

Hi Cleo
I liked your story and how it used the theme well by using an earthquake and how you described it happening. And it was really good.

from Julia

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